Just a little something I wrote

Let me know if anyone has any critiques or compliments!

It starts as soon as we walk through my bedroom door. We walk in, I grab you and push you against the door. Kissing you hard, my hands grad yours and put them above your head stopping you from moving. I move my kisses from your lips to your ear lobe, lightly nibbling in the process. You start to moan and your lips are right by my ear, revving me up further. I start to slowly and lightly move down your neck, my lips gently brushing your skin, occasionally nibbling you. You start to writhe against the door as I continue to kiss your neck. You start begging me to stop teasing you, to touch you, to make you scream. I ignore your pleas and continue my assault on your neck. I start to slowly remove your top, still kissing you. Once I’ve removed your top I move across your collar bone and aim for the other side of your neck, I don’t touch you I just gently breathe, occasionally brushing my lips against your skin, making you moan every time I touch you. I start moving up your neck towards your ear lobe again, I whisper in your ear, telling you how hard I am, you beg me to let you touch me. I keep your hands above your head and tease you more. I start to trace kisses down your bra strap, pulling the straps off with my teeth. I start to kiss across the top of your bra, moving across and following the cup. I pull down the front of your bra to get to your breasts, you gasp as I start to move closer to your nipple, you try to position your body so that your nipple is in my mouth. I keep teasing you, brushing my lips past your nipple. Your moan so sweetly when I brush your nipples, I can’t help myself I suck your nipple into my mouth and drop your arms. As soon as your hands are released from my hold they grab onto the back of my head, pulling my head into your breast hard. You moan and my name escapes your lips. I continue to lick, nibble and suck on your breasts swapping between them increasing your pleasure… I reach around your back and remove your bra… I start to move you towards the bed, still covering your upper body in kisses, you fall back onto the bed causing my lips to suddenly be pried from your breast. You whine because my lips aren’t on you, I climb over you and start to place kisses down your body, on my way south towards your trousers. I start to unbutton your jeans, and pull them down your body. I reach the end of your legs and start to place kisses up the inside of your leg getting closer to your underwear, you start to lose control of your breathing as I get almost close enough to touch your pussy. I stop short and switch legs, I start to place kisses up your other leg, light touches, and soft lips brushing against your skin. As soon as my head is within your reach you start to run your fingers through my hair, pulling me towards your crotch, I resist and manage to place soft kisses on the edge of your underwear, I can’t resist your pull for much longer. I have to taste you… I pull your pants to the side and extend my tongue and run it from the bottom of you slit to the top, lingering on your clit. Slowly sucking it into my mouth, making you squirm. As soon as I start to suck your clit, you pull my face hard into your crotch. You start grinding yourself onto my face, your legs begin to shake, your breathing becomes ragged, and you start to pant… Mews of pleasure start to escape from your lips, you almost scream “FUCK!!! That feels so good”. You feel waves of pleasure originating from your pussy, your pussy lips begin to quiver, your juices start to flow more and more, I do all I can to suck them up, lapping at your clit. You clamp down hard on my head again stopping me from moving. You start to buck and writhe on the bed, waves of ecstasy travel through your body, you feel them rising upwards through your body, your nipples grow harder, you skin starts to tingle, you feel me suck hard one last time on your clit and your body erupts into a powerful orgasm. Lashing around on the bed you manage to get out a few words. None of them intelligible… Your chest starts to heave as you come down from your orgasm, just as you start to regain control over your body, I start lightly blowing on your now wet clit as I slowly start to push a finger inside you, your tight walls gripping me as I slowly push inside you. You let a long low moan out as my finger reaches full depth, I start to rub against the front of your pussy, I’ve stopped blowing on your clit now as I ever so gently start to place kisses around your pussy. Moving painfully close to your clit but not close enough for you to feel the intense pleasure. I move across your clit eliciting more moans from your body and involuntary convulsions as your walls begin to pulsate on my finger, I take the hint and gently start to flick my tongue over your clit as my finger is buried inside you rubbing against the front wall. With my free hand I reach up and start to pinch one of your nipples, this catches you off guard and you jump squeezing my finger hard inside you. The sensation causes you to moan almost immediately after. Your hard nipples between my thumb and finger I start to gently roll it, pulling lightly until it is diamond hard… I reach up to your lips and place my finger in your mouth allowing you to suck on them to get them wet, as soon as my fingers reach your mouth, you suck hard on them and start to moan louder and more lustfully. I pull my fingers away and trace them down your front, your entire body shudders at my touch, I reach your areola and start to circle your nipple, all the while my fingers is working on your pussy and sucking your clit softly. I start to slowly pinch your nipple teasing you… Once that nipple is nice and hard I move across your chest and do the same to your other nipple, lightly teasing the gap between them. Your moans start getting faster and faster again, your body writhing on the bed against the torture of my fingers on your nipples and my mouth on your clit. Suddenly I pinch your nipple and suck your clit hard, you take a sharp breath in and hold it for a few seconds, I carry on sucking your clit as a scream rolls forth from your lips, Waves of pleasure crashing down on your body like a tsunami, the waves just keep coming over you, you scream with each pulse of pleasure getting louder with each one, you grab my hair and pull me up to your face, push my head against yours and kiss so wildly, our hands roaming each other’s body, you find my the button on my jeans and unzip them, flinging them down my body, you do the same with my boxers, pull my shirt over my head… You throw me on my back, look into my eyes, and without a word… You throw me on my back, look into my eyes, and you start to move yourself down my body, lightly tracing your fingertips over my skin, making me shiver with every touch. You don’t break eye contact as you start to approach my cock, you fingers out stretched as you get excruciatingly close. You place your hands either side of my crotch as you start to bring your face closer to my cock. I can feel your hot breath as you get closer, the moisture of your breath teasing me so sweetly. You still haven’t broken eye contact with me, you start to move your hands up body while you continue to breathe heavily on my cock, inhaling the scent deeply, causing you to moan in anticipation of my thick cock slowly entering your mouth. Your hands reach up and grab my arms as reluctantly you start to move your face away from groin, you push my arms hard into the bed pinning in me position. You start to place kisses on my chest, slowly moving down again towards my crotch, your soft lips lightly placing kisses against my skin, teasing me, and winding my sexual tension up further. Your lips approach my hard cock, you still have my hands pinned down as your wet, hot lips approach my cock head. You place a soft kiss on the underside of my cock head eliciting a long drawn out moan from my lips, as a shiver shakes through my body. You move slightly further down my body and extend your tongue, your mouth is watering with anticipation as you move closer to my cock… Your tongue barely sc****s my cock, and I moan loudly “Oh God, what’re you doing to me?!” The pleasure in my voice is undeniable as you continue your teasing, you place a long lick from the base all the way to the tip looking me in eyes, and my entire body shivers as you place a wet kiss on the head. You moan in unison with me as you look into my eyes, open your mouth and take the head of my cock in your mouth, you’re still pinning me down as I start to buck underneath you. The pleasure is so intense I can do nothing but groan, as you start to move your lips up and down the length of my shaft. Your tongue dancing on the underside of my shaft causing my body to shiver involuntarily. You release the grip on one of my hands only to grab both and place them on my stomach. With your now free hand you delicately wrap your fingers around my shaft, you then begin to calmly stroke my shaft in time with the movements of your lips. You squeeze hard, as your saliva lubricates your hand and is teasingly moves up and down, the warmth of your mouth and the dexterity of your tongue edge me ever closer to a powerful orgasm you sense that my cock has gotten harder as you ease your assault on me. You remake eye contact with me as you lift of my cock, this causes me to groan as the head of my cock that was so tenderly engulfed by your warm mouth is now exposed to cold air. You look at me, and with a smirk that says it all climb on the bed next to me. You place your hand over my eyes to block my view, I feel you moving around on the bed next to me, next thing I know your hand on my face has been replaced with your dripping pussy. While I’m coming to terms with the fact your hot pussy is now over my face you plunge my cock into your mouth, I groan as I reach up to your pussy, plant my lips on your clit and begin to suck. You moan on my cock, the vibrations sending amazing sensations through my body, the pleasure urges me on, I reach up and pull your pussy hard onto my face sucking harder on your clit as I push a finger inside you, you moans become more incessant almost constant, I can’t take the pleasure any more, I grunt as my hips being to buck. You know what is coming… I pick up the pace with my finger and being to suck harder again, you feel an orgasm brewing inside you, your body goes tense as you continue to suck my now throbbing cock, you feel me twitch, the thought of what’s to come sends you over the edge. You cum hard you juices run into my mouth as my cock shoots the first thick rope of hot salty cum into your mouth, you moan at the taste as your body continues to convulse. You suck hard again as the second rope shoots forth into your mouth… Your orgasm continuing to ravish your body as my cock continues to spurt in your mouth, as you suck the last drop of cum from me, you pull of my cock with a pop, show me the hot thick load that’s in your mouth, and swallow it. You look at me with a look of pure lust as you begin to inspect my body, almost assessing it… my chest heaving as I recover my orgasm, my cock still twitching. I start to open my eyes as I see you…
To be continued…